IELTS • Writing
IELTS Writing: Write a Clear Opinion Essay Thesis
Answer the exact question and establish a position that your essay can develop consistently.
Build a precise thesis
A strong IELTS-style opinion essay states a clear position in the introduction and maintains it throughout the response. Your thesis should answer the exact question rather than merely repeat the topic.
Three steps
- Identify what the question asks you to decide.
- Choose a clear position.
- Preview the main reasons you will develop.
Practice question
Some people believe cities should spend more money on public parks than on new roads. To what extent do you agree?
Weak: This essay will discuss parks and roads.
Stronger: I largely agree that cities should prioritise public parks because they improve public health and make dense urban areas more liveable, although essential road maintenance must continue.
Useful language
- I strongly agree that…
- I agree to a large extent because…
- Although…, I believe…
- The strongest reasons are…
Guided practice
Improve this thesis: “Technology in schools has advantages and disadvantages.” Make the position clear.
Possible answer
Although excessive screen use can distract learners, schools should continue investing in educational technology because it expands access to information and supports personalised practice.
Production task
Choose one opinion question from your study materials. Write a two-sentence introduction containing context and a precise thesis.