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Is Success Really Earned?
An outcome can show achievement without telling us how much opportunity helped produce it.
Distinguish achievement, effort and structural advantage, evaluate an analogy and negotiate a fair allocation principle.
Created by Denis M., British English teacher.
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Two applicants reach the same result. One had extensive coaching; the other worked with little support. Should the result count equally? First decide what your selection is supposed to reward.
A deliberately unequal game
Watch for: What can the game make visible, and what can it not establish about society?
Is Meritocracy a Myth? · Vox / Fabiola Cineas · Source and credit
Clip A quiz: 6 questions
Choose one answer for each question, then check and read the feedback.
Grammar in a minuteC1–C2 · Avoiding a false either/or
Not simply… but also… adds an influence without denying the first one.
The outcome reflects not simply effort but also access to preparation.
Original practice
You say: Explain an outcome using two contributing factors without assigning invented percentages.
Useful English
Original practice. Say your response before opening a model.
That outcome does not isolate the contribution of…
Limit a causal conclusion.
You say: A winner credits the entire result to talent. Respond.
One possible response
That outcome does not isolate the contribution of talent from the advantages that made practice possible.
Following the rules is different from showing that the rules…
Separate individual conduct from institutions.
You say: A person says the system must be fair because nobody cheated.
One possible response
Following the rules is different from showing that the rules give people comparable opportunities.
Critical Thinking: 3 questions
Choose one question, then follow up, challenge and revise. Use the others for another angle.
What does someone mean when they say they “deserve” success?
Help me start
Distinguish effort, contribution, performance and entitlement.
One possible response
They may mean they worked hard, met a criterion or contributed something useful. These are related but not identical justifications.
Take it further: Which meaning should govern a scholarship?
C2 challenge
Resolve a conflict between two defensible meanings rather than choosing a slogan.
Where does the board-game analogy illuminate society, and where does it break down?
Help me start
Consider feedback, rules, changing opportunities and human agency.
One possible response
It clarifies unequal starting conditions, but a real society has multiple institutions, changing goals and opportunities that a short game cannot capture.
Take it further: What extra evidence would test the social claim?
C2 challenge
Name an observation that could limit, rather than merely confirm, the analogy.
Can acknowledging advantage diminish responsibility?
Help me start
Separate explanation from the obligations that remain.
One possible response
It need not excuse poor conduct. It can change what we infer from success while preserving responsibility for how someone uses an advantage.
Take it further: What should a successful person reasonably acknowledge?
C2 challenge
Avoid turning structural explanation into total helplessness or total blame.
Is the distribution fixed?
Watch for: Which distinctions matter when describing inequality and possible responses?
Is inequality inevitable? · TED-Ed / TED-Ed; George Zaidan, with expert consultation by Branko Milanović · Source and credit
Clip B quiz: 6 questions
Choose one answer for each question, then check and read the feedback.
Grammar in a minuteC1–C2 · Separating a measure from an explanation
The fact that + clause does not explain why + clause distinguishes observation from cause.
The fact that incomes differ does not explain why the gap persists.
Original practice
You say: State one observation and one unanswered causal question.
Useful English
Original practice. Say your response before opening a model.
We are measuring…, not directly measuring…
Clarify a statistic.
You say: A colleague treats income as a complete measure of advantage.
One possible response
We are measuring income, not directly measuring wealth, security or access to support.
The policy should be judged against its stated aim of…
Evaluate a policy on a defined criterion.
You say: Discuss a scholarship meant to widen access.
One possible response
The policy should be judged against its stated aim of widening access, not only the average score of the selected applicants.
Critical Thinking: 3 questions
Choose one question, then follow up, challenge and revise. Use the others for another angle.
Should an institution reward achievement or expand future opportunity?
Help me start
State the institution’s aim before choosing its metric.
One possible response
A prize and an access scholarship can legitimately use different criteria because they serve different purposes.
Take it further: Where might a mixed purpose become misleading?
C2 challenge
Design a transparent rule that acknowledges rather than hides the conflict.
What can two societies with the same average income still differ in?
Help me start
Consider distribution, security and access.
One possible response
They can distribute resources differently, leaving very different levels of insecurity even with the same mean.
Take it further: What extra information would you ask for first?
C2 challenge
Distinguish a useful additional measure from a claim that one measure captures all welfare.
What evidence would show that a policy improved opportunity rather than merely changing appearances?
Help me start
Look beyond the immediate headline result.
One possible response
I would examine whether previously excluded people could participate and benefit over time, while considering other changes that might explain the result.
Take it further: What unintended effect would you monitor?
C2 challenge
Propose a comparison that could reveal both benefits and displacement.
Mastery: use your English
Mastery: 6 questions
Original cases. Choose, then explain one answer aloud.
Grammar masteryC1–C2 · Hypothetical past opportunity
Had + subject + past participle can replace if + past perfect.
Had the applicant received the same support, the result might have differed.
Original practice
You say: Imagine a different opportunity without claiming to know its exact effect.
Critical Thinking: The scholarship committee
- What is this scholarship meant to achieve?
- Which evidence is relevant to that aim?
Fictional case: a scholarship aims to develop future potential while widening access. Applicant A has the stronger current score and extensive coaching. Applicant B has a slightly lower score, limited support and substantial improvement. Agree a principle and a provisional decision.
Open only your own role. Share its information by speaking, without showing the card.
Private Role A
Attainment advocate: you want transparent evidence and worry about speculative claims of potential. You accept that present scores may reflect unequal preparation.
Private Role B
Access advocate: you want opportunity and trajectory considered. You accept that hardship alone does not establish suitability or future success.
- Agree the scholarship’s purpose before choosing a person.
- Propose two relevant criteria and identify missing evidence.
- Give a provisional decision with a limit.
- Reassess after the new information.
What a strong response does
- Separate outcome from causal attribution.
- Distinguish recognition from opportunity-building.
- Avoid inventing a precise counterfactual score.
- Explain the trade-off rather than claiming perfect fairness.
Help me start
“This criterion is relevant because our purpose is…”
One possible exchange
A: Current performance gives us comparable evidence, but it is not a pure measure of potential.
B: Then trajectory and access to preparation should also matter.
A: Agreed, provided we explain how we assess them rather than relying on a sympathetic story.
B: We can make a provisional decision and request the missing evidence consistently.
New information: try again
New fictional detail: B’s recent improvement followed a brief high-quality programme that could also help other applicants. Does the best next step concern this award, wider support or both?
On my own
Take both roles aloud. Pause between them, challenge your first answer and end with a decision that addresses the strongest objection.
One last thought
Complete aloud: “An achievement tells us ___, but does not isolate ___.”
One-minute takeaway
One-minute takeaway
Choose one answer. Then explain your choice in one sentence aloud.
Practice audio
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