TOEFL • Writing
TOEFL Writing: Contribute to an Academic Discussion
Respond directly, connect to the discussion, and contribute a clear new idea.
Join an academic discussion
A strong discussion response states a clear position, responds to an existing idea, and adds a reason or example that develops the conversation.
Three-part structure
- State your view directly.
- Connect to one point already raised.
- Add a new reason, example, or consequence.
Discussion topic
Should universities require students to complete community service before graduation?
Student A: Service gives students practical experience.
Model response: I agree that community service can provide practical experience, particularly when students work in an area related to their studies. It can also help them understand local needs. For example, engineering students who support an environmental project may see how technical decisions affect real communities.
Useful language
- I agree with the point that…
- Another important consideration is…
- This is especially relevant because…
- For instance…
Practice
Add one new idea to this claim: “Community service helps students develop communication skills.”
Possible answer
It may also help students build professional networks with organisations in their area.
Production task
Write one focused response to the topic. Check that you connect to another view and contribute something new.